面試結束寫email給面試官,通常會有幾種情境,包括面試後的感謝、已知未錄取的感謝、決定接受offer以及婉拒offer等等,雖然狀況不同,但是撰寫重點都是必須保持真誠及專業,本文提供上述四種情境的撰寫建議及中英文範本,讓你的印象大加分!
文/Nigel P. Daly
超過五分之一的招募人員表示,如果他們沒有收到感謝信(thank-you note),他們就不太可能僱用那個人。信中可提及面試過程中一些有趣的細節,甚至補充你認為你當時沒有回答好的問題。
Pro Tip
面試時記得向面試官索取名片,並在面試後 24 小時內寫 Email 向他們發送感謝信。加分訣竅:也寫一封感謝信給接待你的人──他/她收到信會很感激的,甚至可能會向面試官美言幾句。
日 期:23.02.2022
主 旨:Anthony Wong 感謝您昨日的寶貴時間
詹女士您好:
我是為了〔昨天〕與您就〔行銷專員〕一職所進行的面試來信。
與您談論此職位非常愉快。這份工作似乎與我的技能和興趣〔十分匹配〕。您描述的〔協作團隊及有趣、快速變化和具挑戰性的文化〕讓我更加確認了我想與您共事的願望。
除了熱情之外,我還將帶來〔優異的商務英語溝通能力、積極主動的態度、強大的組織和時間管理能力〕。
非常感謝您花時間與我面談。希望有機會在您旗下工作,靜候佳音。
安東尼・黃
敬上
From: [email protected]
Date: 23.02.2022
Subject: Anthony Wong - Thank you for your time yesterday
Dear Ms. Chan,
I am writing regarding the interview I had with you [yesterday] for the position of [market associate].
It was very enjoyable to talk with you about the position. The job seems to be [a very good match] for my skills and interests. The [collaborative team and the fun, fast-changing and challenging culture] that you described strongly confirmed my desire to work with you.
In addition to my enthusiasm, I will bring to the position [strong business English communication skills, proactive attitude, and strong organization and time management skills].
I appreciate very much the time you took to interview me. I am very interested in working for you and I look forward to hearing from you regarding this position.
Sincerely yours,
Anthony Wong
即使你收到了遺憾的消息,仍然要保持禮貌和專業的態度以給人留下好印象。誰知道,說不定將來有一天你可能又會回到該公司再進行另一次面試,屆時他們可能會記得你的禮貌回應。
日 期:23.02.2022
主 旨:Anthony Wong 感謝您的寶貴時間
詹女士您好:
謝謝您〔今早〕就〔Expedium〕的〔行銷專員〕職位一事〔來電〕。
得知我沒有得到這份工作,我感到很失望,但我還是要對面試過程中貴公司向我展示的專業精神表達謝意。
我想重申我對在〔Expedium〕工作的興趣,如果未來該職位開缺或有類似職缺,希望能將我列入考慮。
再次感謝您撥冗與我面談。
安東尼・黃
敬上
From: [email protected]
Date: 23.02.2022
Subject: Anthony Wong – thank you for your time
Dear Ms. Chan,
Thank you for your [telephone call] [this morning] regarding the [market associate] position at [Expedium].
I was disappointed to learn I did not get the job, but I would like to express my thanks for the professionalism showed to me during the interview process.
I would also like to reiterate my interest in working for [Expedium], and if the position or similar one becomes available, please keep me in mind.
Thank you again for all your time and consideration.
Best regards,
Anthony Wong
在這封 Email 中,字裡行間應流露出你對即將做出貢獻充滿熱情,並提及該職位的一些細節和商定的就職日期。
日 期:23.02.2022
主 旨:Anthony Wong 接受工作機會
詹女士您好:
謝謝您〔昨天〕就〔Expedium〕的〔行銷專員〕職位一事〔來電〕。
正如電話中我們所討論的,我很高興接受此職務,我想再次感謝您給我這個機會。我渴望為公司做出一番積極的貢獻,並與〔Expedium〕團隊的每個人一起打拚。
依照約定,我的起薪是〔NTD 35, 000〕,含〔勞健保、第一年為期三週的特休,以及每年休閒旅費報銷額度($250–$750 美元,視任期而定)〕。
再次感謝您的青睞,期待自〔20XX 年 7 月 1 日〕起在您旗下工作。如果在此之前,您需要我提供任何其他資訊或書面資料,請不吝告知。
安東尼・黃
敬上
From: [email protected]
Date: 23.02.2022
Subject: Anthony Wong - Job offer acceptance
Dear Ms. Chan,
Thank you for your [telephone call] [yesterday] regarding the [market associate] position at [Expedium].
As discussed on the phone, I am very pleased to accept the position and I would like to thank you again for the opportunity. I am eager to make a positive contribution to the company and work with everyone on the [Expedium] team.
As agreed, my starting salary will be [NTD 35,000]. The package also includes [labor health insurance, a three-week paid vacation in the first year, and reimbursements for leisure travel each year ($250–$750USD, depending on tenure)].
Once again, thank you for this opportunity and I look forward to starting employment with you on [July 1, 20XX]. If there is any additional information or paperwork you need from me prior to then, please let me know.
Best regards,
Anthony Wong
這是一封很難下筆的 Email,因為你有責任給予該公司一個不接受工作機會的充分理由。畢竟,他們花時間面試不只一位求職者而最終選擇了你,因此為何婉拒必須深思熟慮再提出。盡量避免直接或缺乏說服力的原因,例如薪水太低、家人生病或計畫出國唸書等。
日 期:23.02.2022
主 旨:Anthony Wong 回覆工作機會
詹女士您好:
謝謝您〔今早〕就〔Expedium〕的〔行銷專員〕職位一事〔來電〕。
我衷心感謝您提供我在〔Expedium〕工作的機會。
可惜的是,我無法接受此職位,因為我〔兩天前已經決定在另一家公司任職,因為該職務與我目前的職涯目標似乎十分吻合。〕這對我來說是一個艱難的決定,希望您能諒解。
再次非常感謝您錄取我。非常抱歉我目前無法接受貴公司的青睞。然而,假如情況有變,我一定會再次與您聯繫。
祝您順利找到該職位的最佳候選人。
安東尼・黃
敬上
From: [email protected]
Date: 23.02.2022
Subject: Anthony Wong – Reply to job offer
Dear Ms. Chan,
Thank you for your [telephone call] [this morning] regarding the [market associate] position at [Expedium].
I would like to express my sincere gratitude for offering me the opportunity to work at [Expedium].
Unfortunately, I will not be accepting the position as I [already decided to take a position at another company two days ago since it appears to be a very good match for my current professional goals.] It was a tough decision for me, and I hope you can understand.
Once again, thank you very much for the offer. I am sorry that I am unable to accept at the present time. However, should my circumstances change, I will certainly contact you again.
I wish you all the best in finding a suitable candidate for the position.
Best regards,
Anthony Wong

節錄自:貝塔語言《數位英文履歷寫作指南/Nigel P. Daly 著 》
推薦閱讀: